Monday, December 26, 2005

thirst

i burn here for her
as she slithers in her lover's arms
isn't she a chalice brimming with poison?


11 comments:

velvetgunther said...

Hey this is so nice!

Enemy of the Republic said...

This rules! I love it. I've seen other examples of your poetry. Do you want to join our blog? I hesitated since you seem to be on so many, but hey, what's one more?

You write good stuff and your comments on poetry are very adept.

shyloh said...
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shyloh said...

Very Very Clever! I really like this.

darkness said...

very intriguing!

Michael said...

If you could wait a lifetime i acn probably, just about, manage to come up with words to tell you how damned good you are with words!!
Let me first take a Phd in English and then Psycology please.

EATING POETRY said...

ahhh... I love this. Short but sweet, a refreshing drink of water in middle of the work day.

Eros Paradise said...

caught your message at Ryze and took a trip here. excellent poetry
elliott/arminus9

Φ said...

P H E N O M E N A L..actually goes for all the posts i cudn catch up..I liked the gobbled sun so much. New Year to you Dan

Pincushion said...

God..this hurts..
been there!

powerful words as always..

Anonymous Poet said...

Mmmmm . . . I sense some mixed emotions here.