Tuesday, December 20, 2005

Ecphrasis: The Gobbled Sun

So now
you've gobbled the sun
and framed it
in your barge shaped heaven
thinking you've it all
under your thumb
but God may yawn
like a gaping black hole
and spoil your fun.


sophie said...

its like the

smiles freezed
in a festoon
there she smiled for ever...

mermaid said...

This is both serious and playful. The words go well with the pic.

Blue Athena said...
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iamnasra said...

So now
you framed the sun
In a printed photo
Recited many words
Of poetry and prose
I lingered in the recital theme
Breath taking poetry
Sink within our souls
Thank you