Tuesday, August 02, 2005

I Vacillate. . .

I vacillate…
Between hope and despair
Between sanity and desire
Between love and anguish
Between truth and myth
Between pain and ephemeral transcendence
Between salvation and purgation
Between now and eternity
Between thee and my destiny

© Dan Husain

4 comments:

S.L. Corsua said...

Between pain and ephemeral transcendence

Whoa. That was a full stop for me. "Ephemeral transcendence" (rather than "pleasure" or "happiness") as a polar opposite to pain is wonderfully poetic and the creation of admirable wit. ^_^

Pincushion said...

A ying n yang of a composition!
and as always you've hit the nail on the head...
the heart ultimately rules..doesn't it??!!
Bravo!

Hardeep said...

Very nice indeed. Love the last two lines :)

iamnasra said...

I vacillate…
Between hope and despair
Between sanity and desire
Between love and anguish
Between truth and myth
Between pain and ephemeral transcendence
Between salvation and purgation
Between now and eternity
Between thee and my destiny

I vacillate…
between to steal your word and remain honset
Between forgetting your words or allowing it to linegr forver


I guess the magic of your words are playing now